Automotive Photographer & Cinematographer

My treatment for my short film

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As the short story begins we are looking at a penthouse apartment with closed curtains, after a short time they are opened by a young man, this young man is Barry an aspiring local business man who has a huge wallet and powerful friends, you know the type arrogant business men drives an audi? well the story moves onto him and his long term girlfriend Katrina or Kat (as her friends call her) seemingly deeply in love and being extremely flirtatious with one another. After they have gone trough the process of getting ready for there day Katrina Says to Barry

” I may be home late tonight babe as i might have to work late, I’ll send you a text later on to let you know whats going on”

Barry seems slightly disappointed but accepts that she has work commitments and lets her know he doesn’t mind.


After the loved up couple are leaving there apartment block we split off to then to follow the day of Barry as the doors he goes through as in he exits the apartments through the double doors it cuts to him getting in his car, basically taking the distance between the doors away this theme continues throughout the short film for every door he use’s. We arrive at Barry’s office we he walks in with “power walk” like these big shot businessmen have, as he walks through his office he is greeted by various colleagues. One of his friends and colleagues ask’s Barry what he is doing later as they are thinking about hitting the town for a couple of drinks with the boys. Barry replies that he will get back to him later when he knows what is going on with his evening. As he is sitting in his big posh office he receives a text from his girlfriend confirming that she will be home late, as her work needs her to stay over.


at home in the evening we see Barry warming up a microwave meal with an awful reality programme on the tele, and looking rather bored and depressed with his shirt still on from work, with his tie loosened and shirt un-tooked. He then rings his friend from work and says he will join the lads to hit the town.

We then see Barry getting ready for his night out with aftershave being applied and smart – casual wear becoming his dress code.


We then continue the theme with the door cuts starting with Barry leaving the apartment and then entering a taxi that takes him to his friends house where they indulge in some alcoholic beverages and some strong spirits before setting out into another taxi continuing the door to door cuts until we reach the door of the nightclub.


Barry pushes the double doors open to see his girlfriend in the arms of another man grinding and kissing on the dance floor!

Barry automatically see’s RED and charges at the unaware man that Katrina is with, Barry grabs the man by the scruff of the neck and pushes him back through a set of doors. The camera cuts to Barry’s angry face then cuts back to see him actually back in his apartment with his hands around the neck of his helpless quivering girlfriend.


There is a hammering on a door, why? Dare the door be opened?    The door is being knocked on by the police, the door opens to reveal the girl who is black and blue with bruises and cuts in tears.


Author: iimatt

Hello everybody, my names Matthew Clifford I'm 20, living in Coventry and studying a BA Hons Degree in Media Production at Coventry University, I would see myself as a media professional, I'm always looking for interesting media jobs in the industry. I have a great sense of humor and i would see myself as a very approachable guy, if you have anything u want to ask me then go ahead, i dont bite.

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