Well after our last lecture of pitching our idea to the group it seems mine was quite well received from my peers, towards the end of the lecture our tutor Clifton advised us to tell other people in our group about our idea, so i did it seems there were a lot of great responses and everybody seemed very intrigued by the idea.
So here it is……..
My story starts with a young happy flirtatious couple getting up for the day in there modern minamalistic Penthouse apartment, seemingly happy and loved up, our story will follow the day of the man in the relationship who is a young dedicated business man who has massive dreams and aspirations.
Whilst the couple are getting ready for work his girlfriend/fiancé lets him know that she may be working late, which our main character accepts.
After this has finished we then follow the day of our main character as the doors he goes through as in he exits the apartments through the double doors it cuts to him getting in his car, basically taking the distance between the doors away this theme continues throughout the short film for every door he use’s. As he is sitting at home in the evening he gets a call from one of his friends asking if he wants to hit the town with lads, as he is sitting round he says why not, so of he goes out continuing the theme with the door to door cuts. Until our character reaches the club he opens the doors to cut to a POV shot of his girlfriend/Fiancé in the arms of another man, kissing and grabbing each other, so as any other man would do he runs over and grabs the man by the scruff of the neck.
As he grabs him he push’s the man through a set of doors to look down and actually be back at home with with his hands still around the neck…… of his girlfriend it then fades to black.
There is a hammering on a door, why? Dare the door be opened? The door is being knocked on by the police, the door opens to reveal the girl who is black and blue with bruises and cuts in tears.